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Ebuzz
| | Posted on Monday, December 02, 2002 - 07:20 pm: | |
There are moments in time, when windbells chime
as did mine at the time you were born.
The snow fell soft and silent that year
dancing to the song of your newborn tears
and all the world was layed before you
You needed do nothing, for it came to you
curiously observed in a cadid debut
He found you there, as if in a dream
then you enchanted us on the silver screen
and all the world was layed before you
A beautiful angel in a silver box
photographers flash and media talk
A star is born in the heavens of art
and crowds cheered with stolen hearts
and all of you was layed before the world
make haste angel and hurry quick
cast call at 5 and makeup at six
nevermind the critics, don't think of the crowd
remember your lines and do us proud
All the world is waiting for you
The set is ready and the curtains reared
but where is our angel, she is not here
Roll the film, we cannot wait
she'll make her call, she's probably late
Doesn't she know the world is waiting for her?
There are moments in time, when windbells chime
as did mine at the time that you died.
The snow fell soft and silent that year
just as they did when you were here
And all the world misses you
It's winter again, and I love the snow
soft and white, like her hair aglow
the lights in the trees dance in the night
like the blue eyes of Heather shining abright
How clever of you to remind us so
those sharp little pecks on our cheeks from the snow
are kisses from heaven from our angel we love
raining down on us from heaven above.
-Jay Wilson |
Admin
| | Posted on Tuesday, December 03, 2002 - 06:20 am: | |
Very well done Ebuzz! I don't know if Celia has read that yet, but I'm sure she'll have to agree. I think that's the best Heather poem that I've seen yet!
_Tim_ |
Yasminyammy
| | Posted on Tuesday, December 03, 2002 - 02:39 pm: | |
WoW!
I have seen allot of poems and they all sound to ubsest to me (sorry i dont wanna upset anyone)But it must be difficult to make a deepe poem that still sounds normal and not to ubsest.  |
Admin
| | Posted on Tuesday, December 03, 2002 - 04:30 pm: | |
Let me know if you come up with a title. Maybe we could offer some suggestions. Someone with more creativity than myself that is.
_Tim_ |
Ebuzz
| | Posted on Tuesday, December 03, 2002 - 06:06 pm: | |
Thank you all for your kind words and approval. I am by no means a poet, but I believe the greatest reward of being one is knowing your words made sense and touched others. I would agree with Yasminyammy in that I don't consider myself an "obsessed" fan - as I think being so is unhealthy and morbid. However, it is good to remember her and keep her alive within us - for I don't believe a spirit can die. I think she knows about, and likes this board. I think she hears all the nice things you all have said about her, and I'm sure there is a place in her heart for each of you. Merry Christmas to everyone!!!
-JW |
Angelwings06
Username: Angelwings06
Registered: 12-2002
| | Posted on Monday, April 07, 2003 - 08:12 pm: | |
nice. I started a Heather poem but not yet finished it will prpbally be a while on all my poems i alwayse do like 3edits till its dont but when it is done im sure your like mine too but than again it wont be as excellent written as this one has ... great work! |
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